Hey all,

I've done one map (Canyon) here on the exchange, called Sophomore 1. But for the creatively named Sophomore 2 I'd love some feedback. I'm not sure if it's too long, too hard, both, or even too easy?

Feel free to burn it down but please let me know where it can use any improvements. Thanks!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/ld5gq0ecqtb3b2m/Sophomore%202.Map.Gbx

I was just thinking about procrastinating... Here you go!

Sophomore 2 Feedback

Hey wow thanks! Really detailed and really useful

Flow is definitely the keyword I think, and I've been staring blindly at maintaining that start because I liked the dam so much - will improve that

Alright, I think I've improved the flow. I killed a lot of darlings to make sure it would be more fun from the get-go.

It's shortened too.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/iasm7tjrv9azp0v/Sophomore%202B.Map.Gbx

• Start has moved w/ boost and corner
  
• Scenery improved on ramp up
  
• Double bump eased but maintained (it was the best way to get the player up in this situation)
  
• After the 3rd boost the angled corner has been made easier
  
• Jump removed, replaced with trackless area to enable to player to choose an optimal line for the final corner(s)
  

I'd gladly know what you reckon now! Thanks!