Mine is really good, please don't fall off your chair

Time for another round of results!

It was very difficult to determine a winner, so we the elves picked three:

• 1. Dodeka: Nice tension, but no TM relation. Ending could be better.
  Marius89: Great idea with the names. Well put, but the plot is very flat.
  Ketrab: Fun to read, although a bit inconsistent.
  
• 2. Zack11: Great idea, but a few reptitive words
  
• 3. Riolu: dank maymays
  
• 4. Bestnoob: creative story, but minus points for German entry.
  Janne: very short story, but cute story.

The 1. place will earn 2 Candy each submission and all others receive 1 Candy.

Here can you find all stories, if you want to read them again